Feedback from music magazine sketches

Feedback from George:

The sketches for the music magazine have been laid out nicely and clearly, with good explanation. They also give a good idea of the background colour and the main features of the magazine. The double page spread could be better proportioned and more accurate to the actual size.

Feedback from James:

I like the sketches as they show how the magazine will look and the colour scheme. However they could be more accurate and the boxes could look better and not overlay each other.

Sketch of music magazine front cover, contents and double page spread

My front cover sketch has planned out the layout for how I want my front cover to look and I want the image of my model to cover the whole page. There will also be text and a quote, probably from ‘Drake’ as he is the main target of the magazine. The layout is also inspired by other Drake and R&B magazines.

My contents page sketch will have more text than pictures as it will show the features of my magazine.

My double page spread will be laid out evenly so it is neat and eye pleasing, with pictures and text to comfort the page.

All sketches are Drake and R&B inspired as I have looked at the magazines and stylised mine to be similar.

Target audience – music magazine

General

Age: Teenagers

Location: England

Gender: Male

Income level: Comfortable middle class

Education level: Fairly well educated (at secondary school)

Marital or Family Status: Parents/Siblings

Occupation: Part-time job

Ethnic background: Everyone

 

Specific

Personality: Happy, nice person

Attitudes: They have a positive attitude

Values: Family, friends

Interests/Hobbies: Listening to music

Lifestyles: Healthy

Behaviour: Well behaved