Feedback from George:
The sketches for the music magazine have been laid out nicely and clearly, with good explanation. They also give a good idea of the background colour and the main features of the magazine. The double page spread could be better proportioned and more accurate to the actual size.
Feedback from James:
I like the sketches as they show how the magazine will look and the colour scheme. However they could be more accurate and the boxes could look better and not overlay each other.
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